Ohio Impromptu

From what i could understand, it was great. Its my fault i can't understand it though so don't change a thing. Nice work indeed.

Why thankyou. :wink:

To The Sound Of Tuesday The twilight forced itself on the surroundings, and paper was the resistance. Lighting a fire in flesh of caligraphy, is winning back the lost ground, ...

Simply amazing. I love the use of colour descriptions. It was great until about this line and the calender is hung on every wall and then it just got better. ...

I feel proud that one of my titles spawned something better than anything I've ever written. :) Seriously, that was amazing. The desperation (for lack of a better word) was ...

Sounds like a solid prelude there man. Definately makes me wanna find out how this goes. Cant see anything wrong with it all so i'm just telling you that it ...

Howdy. About Last Night... The powerlines separate us from silence, Buzzing, though we werent sure in which direction. A backyard and a faint light, a different light, Discussing a week ...

Haha, wow. Thats the second piece I've read tonight that is simply amazing. Why is everyone so much better than me?! :( Anyways, keep up the great work. Always keep ...

Simply amazing. Anything short of a 10/10 wouldnt do it justice at all. Thats all i can say really. Just know that you have amazing talent. Good day to you. ...

NO!!! mxtabs must die!!! is the way 8)

Ok, here is the final product. Its exactly the same but with a new verse in the middle. Enjoy. Weaving thread through itself, forcing perfection can never work. Difficulty is ...

Really? No one wants to post anything?

Hmmm...theres no denying there was a tonne of feeling behind it, but the way it was written kinda made me think of Dr. Suess. That doesnt necessarily mean its bad, ...

Simple, yet good. After i read it i thought to myself that maybe it would be better if it were longer. Then i realized that if it were longer it ...

Wow, that was amazing. The feeling behind it was mind-blowing and the story was just as good. I absolutely adore the last line! I can't offer any criticism because i ...